Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions

Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions

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(THE IMPACT OF CAKE APP ON ENHANCING TOEIC SPEAKING COMPETENCE FOR EFL LEARNERS AT A PRIVATE ENGLISH CENTER IN HO CHI MINH CITY) - HUA TRAN THANH TRUC

  • What makes this ...

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(THE IMPACT OF CAKE APP ON ENHANCING TOEIC SPEAKING COMPETENCE FOR EFL LEARNERS AT A PRIVATE ENGLISH CENTER IN HO CHI MINH CITY) - HUA TRAN THANH TRUC

  • What makes this introduction effective?

The introduction by Hua Tran Thanh Truc is highly effectivebecause it follows a very logical “funnel” path, starting with global AI trends and narrowing down to the specific speaking needs of students at the IMAP center.

  • How are the backgroundproblem statementresearch questions, and significance presented?

The chosen introduction is highly effective due to its logical progression and comprehensive scope. First, it sets the stage by illustrating the big picture: how globalization and technology—especially Artificial Intelligence (AI)—are now a natural part of learning a new language. It makes the topic feel current and important. Secondly, it focuses on a specific problem: speaking skills. Since speaking is a key part of mastering a language, the introduction explains why the Cake app is being used at the IMAP center. To make the results easy to measure, the study aligns the app's use with standardized benchmarks, such as IELTS, TOEFL, and TOEIC. This gives the study a clear goal. Furthermore, the introduction is well-supported. It includes expert citations to give the topic more weight and lists two clear research questions. Finally,  the author highlights the practical significance of the study, showing how it benefits both their own professional development and the broader teaching community at IMAP.

  • What will you borrow or adapt from this introduction for your own thesis?

Inspired by this model, I will structure my own thesis with a similar logical flow, ensuring a strong balance between theoretical research and practical application.

Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions

Nguyễn Đăng HảiHUF04 -
Hi Nhi
From your analysis, I learned a lot about how an effective introduction should be structured, especially the idea of using a clear “funnel” approach. Starting from a...

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Hi Nhi
From your analysis, I learned a lot about how an effective introduction should be structured, especially the idea of using a clear “funnel” approach. Starting from a broad context like globalization and AI and then narrowing down to a specific learning problem makes the topic feel both relevant and focused. It also helped me see how linking a study to standardized tests such as TOEIC can make the research goals more concrete and measurable.

I agree with the points made in the analysis because the introduction does seem well-organized and purposeful. The way the background, problem statement, research questions, and significance are presented creates a strong logical flow. I particularly agree that the use of expert citations strengthens the study and makes it more academically convincing. In addition, clearly stating the practical benefits for both teachers and learners adds real value to the research, rather than keeping it purely theoretical.