Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions - Hương Thuỳ

Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions - Hương Thuỳ

Nguyễn Ngọc QuyHUF04 -
  • What makes this introduction effective?

    • After reading some thesis introductions from the resources, I think the thesis of Ms. Huong Thuy has the best introduction. ...

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  • What makes this introduction effective?

    • After reading some thesis introductions from the resources, I think the thesis of Ms. Huong Thuy has the best introduction. The reason is that this part is well-structured, including from the background to the significance. Also, in each part, these information are presented logically in order to point out the gaps that remains in the previous researches.
  • How are the background, problem statement, research questions, and significance presented?

    • In the background part, she gives a clear context to express the key role of vocabulary and grammar, a variety of tools and platforms, and the aim of the the study. She then mentions the researchers who have the nearly same topic that conducted before.
    • In the problem statement part, she acknowledges that the interaction and interest of Cake app is useful for enhancing academic outcomes. However, she also points out the gaps that remains in the previous studies, such as efficacy of the Cake app, engagement & motivation, long-term retention, and integration with classroom instruction.
    • In the research questions, she makes up two questions which consist of quantitative and qualitative research questions to measure the result. They are good to consolidate this study. 
    • Besides, she expresses the significance and rationale of the study to contribute or fill the knowledge gaps.
  • What will you borrow or adapt from this introduction for your own thesis?

    • From this thesis, I can learn the way to write the introduction, which has a clear structure and ensure pointing out the background, problem statement, research questions, and significance & rationale logically. 

Analyzing the Best Thesis Introductions - Hương Thuỳ

Nguyễn Thị Ngọc ÁnhHUF04 -
I learned from your analysis that an effective introduction should clearly identify research gaps while building on previous studies. I agree with your point that ...

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I learned from your analysis that an effective introduction should clearly identify research gaps while building on previous studies. I agree with your point that highlighting issues such as learner engagement, long-term retention, and classroom integration strengthens the problem statement. I also agree that using both quantitative and qualitative research questions makes the study more comprehensive, as it examines both learning outcomes and learners’ experiences. Your focus on a clear and logical structure is very helpful and relevant for thesis writing.